Cross-cultural Communication

The French business proposal: structure and key phrases

By Victor Tseng 曾浩瑜4 min

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When you are bidding for work with a company or institution in Côte d'Ivoire (in West Africa, French-speaking, the world's largest cocoa producer), a well-structured proposal in French is often the main document that circulates internally and drives the decision. The people deciding may never meet you and will see only this document, so its format and wording stand in for your company's professionalism.

The standard structure

Section (French) English What goes in it
Page de titre Title page Title, recipient, author's name and title, company name, reference number, date and place
Sommaire de gestion Executive summary The key points, written for decision-makers
Table des matières Table of contents Include it if the document is long
Contexte et compréhension du besoin Background and understanding of the need Restate the client's situation and needs in your own words
Objectifs Objectives What this collaboration is meant to achieve
Solution proposée / Méthodologie Proposed solution and approach How you will do it, and in how many phases
Calendrier Timeline Timing and deliverables for each phase
Équipe et références Team and track record Who is responsible, past projects
Proposition financière Financial proposal Prices, payment terms, validity period
Annexes Appendices Company profile, certifications, technical specifications, etc.

The Office québécois de la langue française (OQLF) recommends that the title page of a report or service proposal (offre de service) include the title (with a subtitle if needed), the recipient, the author's name and title, the company or unit name, an appropriate reference number, and the date and place. As for the summary (sommaire), a management summary written for managers usually runs to no more than 400 words (mots) and presents the main content in the same order as the full document.

The pricing section: spell it out to avoid disputes

Taking French practice as an example, a quotation (devis) should state the services or products, prices and payment terms, and carry a validity period; if the client signs it within that period, the quotation has the force of a contract. The pricing section of your proposal should therefore at least make clear:

  • Whether prices include tax: hors taxes (HT) excluding tax, toutes taxes comprises (TTC) including all taxes
  • The currency and how amounts are written (French uses a comma as the decimal separator and a space as the thousands separator)
  • Payment terms: deposit percentage, payment deadline, payment method
  • How long the quotation is valid

Check the applicable tax rates and invoicing rules with Côte d'Ivoire's Direction générale des impôts (DGI) or a local accountant.

Key phrases, section by section

Opening - Suite à notre entretien du 12 novembre, nous avons le plaisir de vous soumettre notre proposition. (Further to our meeting of 12 November, we are pleased to submit our proposal.)

Understanding of the need - Vous souhaitez… (You wish to…) - Notre compréhension de vos besoins est la suivante : (Our understanding of your needs is as follows:)

Solution and timeline - Nous proposons une démarche en trois phases. (We propose a three-phase approach.) - La livraison est prévue pour le 15 janvier 2027. (Delivery is scheduled for 15 January 2027.)

Pricing - Les prix s'entendent hors taxes. (All prices are exclusive of tax.) - La présente offre est valable 30 jours à compter de sa date d'émission. (This offer is valid for 30 days from its date of issue.)

Closing - Nous restons à votre disposition pour tout complément d'information. (We remain at your disposal for any further information.) - Dans l'attente de votre retour, nous vous prions d'agréer, Madame, Monsieur, l'expression de nos salutations distinguées. (Looking forward to your reply, yours faithfully.)

The dates, number of phases and validity period in these examples are for illustration only; adjust them to your situation.

One line for Asian companies

A good French proposal first proves you have understood the client, then explains what you will do and what it will cost; a clear structure and explicit pricing win more trust than elaborate wording.


References: OQLF: Présentation et mise en page de la page de titre; OQLF: Présentation et mise en page du sommaire; Propulse by CA: Différence entre devis, facture et bon de commande

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